金研托福代报名快讯:到2014年6月16日下午托福官网没有释放考位,托福代报提醒考生抓紧时间报名,托福代报提示考生注意自己的考试时间。

托福写作中,经常有托福代报名用户顾及更多的是怎样用经典句加分,却时常疏忽了打好根底的重要性。在用句措辞不能保证彻底正确的状况下,我们还不如用些简略不会错的语句,少一些虚浮富丽的辞藻,这篇文章为各位托福代报名用户罗列的过错,值得我们进行参阅。

1.用词不当

学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的疑问,可是要注意的是一些最最根本的过错是不能犯的。

• In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

——problems应改为questions

2.拼写过错

这儿的拼写过错不是指在考试时分的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写回忆的过错。

• In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

——judgement应改为judgment

3.乱用大词

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

这儿的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该语句还有以下疑问:

1)该作文题目是讲学生是不是大概做兼职,因而children的出现就显得很不可思议;

2)although和but是不能连用的;

3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的啥;

4.表达中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

语句中划线有些的表达过于中式化。

  5.表意重复

•They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面现已说到了兄弟,后边又说到兄弟。

• The show is so compelling but attractive.

•compelling和attractive是近义词,所以这儿这么写就让人不明白。

6.固定用法过错

• To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

——To some extends应改为To some extent

7.例子夸大

• For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

虽然好心的谎话是必要的,可是其成效明显没有这么大。

8.成分剩余

• According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是剩余的成分。

9.词性紊乱

• However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

语句中的privacy和embarrassingly大概改成private和embarrassing。

10.文体不正式

• All of the players gonna to tell the truth in attempt to win $500,000.

——gonna过于口语化。

• In addition, I think people shoudn’t always tell the truth to others.

——在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写,这儿大概写should not。

11.两个独立语句间无连词

• Another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic, and it’s suitable for them to choose such jobs, which will provide them with rich experience that is essential for their future success.

这个过错犯的频率适当高,必定要注意。

12.时态过错

托福大作文通常使用如今时态,除了拿过去事情作为例子用过去时态。

• Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

—— claimed大概改为claim

13.不知所云

• They also mention that in modern society there are too much entertainment bothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the success.

这句话彻底不知道是啥意思,逻辑紊乱,这是中国学生经常犯的过错。

以上是列举出的托福写作中常犯的13个过错,希望我们在备考托福写作的过程中,针对本身的状况,反复查看和更改,不断操练才会有所前进。天道酬勤,相信我们的支付,在最后的托福考试成绩中也会看到回报。